What does the advisor REALLY mean?

You have some good ideas here, but they are not completely coming through to the reader.

--> They are REALLY poorly written.

They are looking better, but I still had some questions and suggestions.

--> they are still bad.

These look good. I think you are ready to submit them after you make some small changes to the wording.

--> I'm tired of this. YOU CAN NOT EVEN SPELL!!